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This
technique can be further expanded upon by creating word
pictures in the prospect's mind that help them visualize
actually having and using your product or service-- even
before they order! Here
is a paragraph of some typical direct
mail
copy:
"If you decide to buy now, the CloseShave Razor will be shipped Federal Express on the same day you order. Batteries are included." OK.--- Not bad, but what if a little copywriting magic make it stronger by helping the prospect visualize actually owning and using the razor? Like this: "Your new CloseShave Razor will be shipped overnight to your home or office on the same day you order. It will be carefully packed and shipped to you along with 2 fresh AA batteries--- that way you can use it as soon as you open your package. Imagine yourself getting a clean, close shave with your new cordless razor at the office just before an important meeting or even this weekend at your favorite wilderness campsite." See how this works? You are helping the reader picture himself opening and using his new razor--- on the very next day! If they don't buy, they'll have to deny themselves the positive feelings that they had thinking about it. It's an incredibly powerful technique that really works. Direct Mail Tips: 1. Count the number of times you use the words 'you' and 'your' in your copy. Now count the number of times you use words like 'I,' 'we,' and 'us'--- Eliminate as many of these last three words as you can, so you focus on the prospect more than yourself or your own company. 2. Make sure you have created a compelling word picture in your copy that describes the prospect actually having and benefiting from your product or service. Telling them about benefits is one thing, but illustrating them in their mind is quite another! |
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